Nice piece of work ^^It requires real talent to just listen to MP3 and translate notes. It's definately a great achievement. Just two minor things. I think you made some mistakes in the beginning when chord2 is lower than melody, cuz the harmonic sounds a bit strange... or should it be? And by the end of the music, somewhere you placed r4 instead of r8 but i think keeping r8 makes the song sounds better, just my own opinion.
The modified melody:
t230defgefd+rdefgagfedefgefd+rdefgagfc+defgefd+rde
fgg+f+eddfd+e<g+ba+aed+eff+gg+a>defgefd+rdefgagfed
efgefd+rdefgagfc+defgefd+rdefgg+f+eddfd+e<g+ba+aed
+eff+gg+a>defgefd+rdefgagfedefgefd+rdefgagfc+defge
fd+rdefgg+f+eddfd+e<g+ba+aed+eff+gg+a>defgefd+rdef
gagfedefgefd+rdefgagfc+defgefd+rdefgg+f+eddfd+e<g+
ba+aed+eff+gg+al8frf+rg4.rfrg4.rfrg4.rfrg4.rfrg+4.
(everything the same til this point)
rfrg4.rfrg4.rfrg4.rfrg4.rfrg+4.rara+4.rg+ra+4.rg
+ra+4.rg+ra+4.rg+rb4.rg+ra+4.rg+ra+4.rg+ra+4.rg+r
a+4.ra+ra4.
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