[GrimofLight]

Hey people im new at composing music in mabinogi i just made a song...
tell me anything i need to improve on...

Rank:F Composing

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Melody:
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Chord 1:
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[Diddyfresh]

thhxx

[Exandriel]

It's a great start . Hopefully later when you get higher compose ranks, you can improve on it.