[The-IRS]

lol my friend asked me to make this for him but he lost interest in mabi and i just found it again.
All credit goes to nintendo of america for making the song.
Its a bit too long for me to compose but if anyone else could it would be awesome!

[Twinrova] 
[Compose Rank] 1 (873/769/254)

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[The-IRS]

PLEASE COMMENT!!!
I Enjoy any form of feedback

[Exandriel]

The Bass sounds off, and there are some excessive notes

for instance, at measure 14 there is a long sequence of notes where both the melody and chord 1 are playing the same note.

If you get rid of the chord 1 notes at this point, you'll have a lot more room for later notes in the song.

Also I would reccomend capping the song off at some point, because the melody continues for a long in the game.

BUT! Aside from what i've mentioned in my constructive criticism, it sounds good .

[The-IRS]

Thank you. But unfortunately, I do not know how to delete notes... I had to redo this song about 10 time because i dont know

[Esharp]

Originally Posted by The-IRS

I do not know how to delete notes...

Delete a note and replace it with a corresponding rest so the rest of the song sounds right. (If you delete a g32, replace it with an r32.) After that, optimize it.

[The-IRS]

Originally Posted by Esharp

Delete a note and replace it with a corresponding rest so the rest of the song sounds right. (If you delete a g32, replace it with an r32.) After that, optimize it.

THANK YOU